Every 11th week at twilight a man made of frozen water comes into a village in Westpesun and takes some children away with him but these children aren’t scared they are exited because it is a once in a lifetime opportunity,he takes them to his layer and teaches them the way of the water which enables them to control water but if they abuse this power will fight back.But one night one of his pupils abused said power and striped the city hall of all its valubels but the water retaliated back and all that was left was a rubber.
A man made of water
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An interesting premise… you could develop that idea into a longer narrative perhaps…